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Put the doer in the subject and the action in the verb.
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Carrying meaning in the verb rather than in an adjective pile.
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Verbs frozen into abstract nouns, and how to unfreeze them.
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The default for clarity and accountability.
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When the actor is unknown, irrelevant, or deliberately backgrounded.
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There is and it is burying the real subject.
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Alternating length to control pace and emphasis.
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A short sentence after long ones lands hard.
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Putting the most important information last.
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Putting the point first when the reader is skimming.
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Keeping the subject and its verb close together.
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Long interruptions forcing the reader to hold the thread.
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Too much before the main clause exhausts working memory.
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Main clause first, then accumulating detail.
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Delaying the main clause for suspense and emphasis.
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Matching form across coordinated elements.
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Stress patterns and syllable count shaping how prose sounds.
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Three-part structures for balance and memorability.
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Pairing opposites in matched grammatical form.
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Removing words that add no meaning.
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First and foremost, each and every, full and complete.
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Very, really, quite, extremely as noise.
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Stacked qualifiers dissolving the claim.
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Chains of "of the" that a possessive or verb would replace.
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Constructions that add words without adding content.
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Stating what IS rather than what is not.
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Moving between concrete detail and general claim deliberately.
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Specifics that make an abstract claim believable.
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Evidence that lets the reader draw the conclusion.
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One controlling metaphor, sustained, not mixed.
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Figures worn smooth into invisibility.
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The most reliable test of rhythm and breath.